Post by Juji the Kitsune on Jan 4, 2008 2:28:41 GMT -5
I have posted a topic of this befor but since there is a section about writing and poetry and ect. I wanted to post my ade up story idea here ^^ I wrote came up with this idea just for fun 
and since I'm into fantasy ^^ so what do u guys think? feel free to give ideas to if u like ^^
these are just main chracter profiles and the intor of what the story is about
in fairytales, theres always a fair maiden, and a prince, the fair maiden is held captive my a fire breating dragon, and the prince is on a quest to save her. he slays the dragon and he and the fair maiden live happly ever after...however this story is diffrent...it's a tale of a love triangle between a common beautiful villager, a handsome strong prince and a legendary dragon. who will the beautiful villager choose, the prince or the dragon?
characters(main)
Saga: the villager girl and object of love in the story
hair: light brown
eyes: green
sign: scorpio
age 18
talent: singing and playing a flute
favorite things: playing her flute, writing songs and poems,
and is learning how to use a sword
Prince Cyrus: the handsome prince who wants to marry saga
hair:black
eyes: blue
sign: Pisces
age 25
talent: swordsman skills and archey
favorite things: reading , archery, taking walks around the forests
and practicing swordsman skills,
the dragon: the legendary monster of the forest in the tall mountains, who wants saga to stay with him in the cave forever
eyes:violet/green
hgt 20 ft
type:moon dragon
(everything is unknown)
introductionwhat the story is about)
in a castle town village lived a poor family, a feild worker, his son and his daughter. the father was a widower, his wife died giving birth to Saga, and leaving her with all her old duty, and leaving saga her treasure, a wooden flute that saga now plays in the streets for some extra money to keep her family under a roof. saga wasnt like any typical girl, she was infact a tomboy, she enjoyed doing things a boy would do, she ventured in vast forests with her brother and father. and she wasnt very boycrazy over a knight or prince like any other village girl who wanted to gain the attention of the prince in there town. though saga and her family had very little of money, they where very appreciating people, and appreciated smaller things in life and eachother.
one day saga had when to town to preform with her flute, as she showed her talent to the public, one very mysterious man who had admired her work of talent and beauty, had left her a few gold coins that is too last and a red rose...when the girl had returned home, all she had on her mind was the mysterious man. the next day when evening had came close , as she was returning home from preforming, she came across 3 shady lecherous men, she couldnt escape them! as the tries to fight away the 3 men try to harass saga, she cpuldnt run, she was helpless. luckly the mystrious man had come to her rescue, he ask if she alright, abd she gives him a posittive answer. the 2 spend the last few hours talking and then fell in love. since the mysterious man felt he can trust saga he finally reveails.........he's the prince of the castle town....
and since saga had told him that her family had no money he tells her one of his royal family secrets that had been passed down. "in the forrest lies a sacred pond of water in a mythical cave,..called Unicorns blood, no mortal human can obtain this special water, it was sead, after you have the water of unicorn's blood, you and those u care for will have a good life forever and you will have luck everyday, but it was also sead, the unicorns blood is very well hidden and is in an area of the point of no return, whic is ironicly by the tallest mountains in the place where a man-eating monster lurks..the dragon.....as Saga thought to herself, she wanted to help her family, she wants to give them a better life. so she plans to venture into the forest to find the unicorns blood, even if it would cost her life. so she takes her one of her brother's swords and things she will need for her secret quest and goes off to the forest.
in her quest she faced hungry ogers, trolls and many monsters and even runs into "the dragon" the dragon captures saga and takes her to his cave in the high mountains,
meanwhile in the castle town the villagers including her family begin to panic, and the prince began to worry, so he request to the king (his father) to let him go to the forest to find saga , and if he succeds finding her, he will marry her. the king decides to let his son go, since he now knows how saga had made him very happy, the king send his greatist knights along to help aid the prince into finding saga.
and since she had been kidnaped, she finds herself in the dragons cave. thoguh she was scared of the dragon, she was a bit confussed on something..why hasnt he eaten her,..a few days had passed as she had stayed with the dragon , it has seemed the dragon was fond of her, and he wasnt as dangrous or scary as villagers made him seem. and he is also one of the last breed of dragons of his kind, since his family was slayed by knights, since he found something special in her do to her soft kindness and talent of her flute, the dragon request saga stay with him in the caves forever........................................... .....................who will she chose,..the prince she had fallen inlove with when he finds her, or her new special friend, the Dragon
and since I'm into fantasy ^^ so what do u guys think? feel free to give ideas to if u like ^^these are just main chracter profiles and the intor of what the story is about
in fairytales, theres always a fair maiden, and a prince, the fair maiden is held captive my a fire breating dragon, and the prince is on a quest to save her. he slays the dragon and he and the fair maiden live happly ever after...however this story is diffrent...it's a tale of a love triangle between a common beautiful villager, a handsome strong prince and a legendary dragon. who will the beautiful villager choose, the prince or the dragon?
characters(main)
Saga: the villager girl and object of love in the story
hair: light brown
eyes: green
sign: scorpio
age 18
talent: singing and playing a flute
favorite things: playing her flute, writing songs and poems,
and is learning how to use a sword
Prince Cyrus: the handsome prince who wants to marry saga
hair:black
eyes: blue
sign: Pisces
age 25
talent: swordsman skills and archey
favorite things: reading , archery, taking walks around the forests
and practicing swordsman skills,
the dragon: the legendary monster of the forest in the tall mountains, who wants saga to stay with him in the cave forever
eyes:violet/green
hgt 20 ft
type:moon dragon
(everything is unknown)
introductionwhat the story is about)
in a castle town village lived a poor family, a feild worker, his son and his daughter. the father was a widower, his wife died giving birth to Saga, and leaving her with all her old duty, and leaving saga her treasure, a wooden flute that saga now plays in the streets for some extra money to keep her family under a roof. saga wasnt like any typical girl, she was infact a tomboy, she enjoyed doing things a boy would do, she ventured in vast forests with her brother and father. and she wasnt very boycrazy over a knight or prince like any other village girl who wanted to gain the attention of the prince in there town. though saga and her family had very little of money, they where very appreciating people, and appreciated smaller things in life and eachother.
one day saga had when to town to preform with her flute, as she showed her talent to the public, one very mysterious man who had admired her work of talent and beauty, had left her a few gold coins that is too last and a red rose...when the girl had returned home, all she had on her mind was the mysterious man. the next day when evening had came close , as she was returning home from preforming, she came across 3 shady lecherous men, she couldnt escape them! as the tries to fight away the 3 men try to harass saga, she cpuldnt run, she was helpless. luckly the mystrious man had come to her rescue, he ask if she alright, abd she gives him a posittive answer. the 2 spend the last few hours talking and then fell in love. since the mysterious man felt he can trust saga he finally reveails.........he's the prince of the castle town....
and since saga had told him that her family had no money he tells her one of his royal family secrets that had been passed down. "in the forrest lies a sacred pond of water in a mythical cave,..called Unicorns blood, no mortal human can obtain this special water, it was sead, after you have the water of unicorn's blood, you and those u care for will have a good life forever and you will have luck everyday, but it was also sead, the unicorns blood is very well hidden and is in an area of the point of no return, whic is ironicly by the tallest mountains in the place where a man-eating monster lurks..the dragon.....as Saga thought to herself, she wanted to help her family, she wants to give them a better life. so she plans to venture into the forest to find the unicorns blood, even if it would cost her life. so she takes her one of her brother's swords and things she will need for her secret quest and goes off to the forest.
in her quest she faced hungry ogers, trolls and many monsters and even runs into "the dragon" the dragon captures saga and takes her to his cave in the high mountains,
meanwhile in the castle town the villagers including her family begin to panic, and the prince began to worry, so he request to the king (his father) to let him go to the forest to find saga , and if he succeds finding her, he will marry her. the king decides to let his son go, since he now knows how saga had made him very happy, the king send his greatist knights along to help aid the prince into finding saga.
and since she had been kidnaped, she finds herself in the dragons cave. thoguh she was scared of the dragon, she was a bit confussed on something..why hasnt he eaten her,..a few days had passed as she had stayed with the dragon , it has seemed the dragon was fond of her, and he wasnt as dangrous or scary as villagers made him seem. and he is also one of the last breed of dragons of his kind, since his family was slayed by knights, since he found something special in her do to her soft kindness and talent of her flute, the dragon request saga stay with him in the caves forever........................................... .....................who will she chose,..the prince she had fallen inlove with when he finds her, or her new special friend, the Dragon
